开头:直接点题。“My name is Lin Huaian. I am a student of ZhongFa Middle School.” (我叫林怀安,是中法中学的学生。)
正文:使用准备模板。“I get up early every day and study hard. I like my teachers and clas**ates. After class, I like to play ball games.” (我每天早起,努力学习。我喜欢我的老师和同学。课后,我喜欢打球。)句式简单,语法正确。
亮点尝试:他尝试用上一个背诵的句式:“I think it is important for us to study hard for our future.” (我认为为我们未来努力学习很重要。)
结尾:“I enjoy my school life very much.” (我非常享受我的校园生活。)